Comments on: TOO CLOSE

By: J&R

J&R — Sun, 30 May 2010 15:01:04 +0000

Rim1789:
Thank you for reading & commenting! Glad that you really enjoyed the story, the various characterisations and all the interactions between the characters. =) And well, Kame is infinitely cuter than Yamapi so obviously he wins by a long shot. *is biased* XD

By: Rim1789

Rim1789 — Sun, 30 May 2010 06:24:00 +0000

WOW! Seriously, one of th best Pikame out there! I was getting desperate in finding good ones^^ Dear I love you :D Yamapi was sooo fun
in this one, always messing with Kame’s head ^^ Awfully cute ^______^ From the first chapter to the last one! and quite hot too ^^ I love the fact that Nino is his cousin xD I loved every jealous!Pi ^^ I loved the samll Kokame!frienship part :DDD They seem so real, their reaction were so real too… Thank you ^^ I loved the Yuichi/Jin part too and how they interact with Kame^^ Same with Okada-san^^

Kame was so cute^____________^and Pi was cute too, though Kame win by a long shot. I loved also all the part where Kame (for example wih the drug) is tempting Pi xDDD

Thank you so so so much dear^^

By: J

Thu, 15 May 2008 02:33:28 +0000

Winnie: ~~*feels obliged to say this*~~ You should have gone to school! D: Don't let fandom get in the way of education, and I'm saying this from experience. =X ~~Although I may not always take my own advice.~~ Anyway, I'm glad that you enjoyed reading this story! And thank you so much for taking the time to leave a comment as well. :)

By: Winnie

Winnie — Wed, 14 May 2008 17:08:37 +0000

I just started reading this fic last night, till really late.
And i woke up late this morning and gave some excuse of not going to school..and after that come back to continue from where i left off…
And i just finished..yay
I really love this…why are you so good at writing?? You are so awesome as well as this story.
♥

By: J

Tue, 03 Jul 2007 15:20:06 +0000

Kay: Hihi, thanks for reading this fic. ^^ Yes, Yamapi in this fic seriously has problems with showing his affections in the right way, which would have ended the fic earlier though (like at chapter two, lol). But ah well, my Yamapi-muse likes to torture me and seem to think that being hentai is the way to go. :D

By: Kay

Kay — Tue, 03 Jul 2007 02:40:27 +0000

@Chapter 9
Ohmygod, I loved it so much! Poor Kazuya ~ But I’m glad it was such a sweet ending for the both of them, even if Yamapi needs to work on how to show his affections appropriately =.=” But ah, alls well that ends well.

Thanks for this! :D

By: shizzu

shizzu — Sun, 01 Jul 2007 16:14:04 +0000

hahahaahah!!!!
well, you were doing a good job though~~
*winks* ^_____^

By: J

Sun, 01 Jul 2007 16:09:04 +0000

Koishi: Nice to hear that you loved the ending, even if I personally hated it. ^^;; Ah, others might say I’m just too hard on myself.

I seem to have a tedency to use Jin as a supporting character for the purpose of humour. Although this time I was also trying to let JinYu infiltrate the readers’ minds. Oops. :P

As for writing more PiKame in the future… The next fic I’m working on, hm, I have a feeling PiKame fans might start to hate me if they read it. o_O;;;

shizzu: Ah that’s what happens when the author (ie: myself) becomes a coward and doesn’t dare to go further with the smut level because she knows she fails terribly at it.

Anyway, thanks for reading + commenting! You haven’t told me about your concert experience though.

By: shizzu

shizzu — Sun, 01 Jul 2007 16:01:38 +0000

hahah LOL yeah!! it was abit off place~~ ^^
like the hentai-ness stopped half way through the story and then it got sweet …….but it doesnt matter~ as long as their together~~ ^^ im an anti-sad ending person..^____^

By: Koishi

Koishi — Sun, 01 Jul 2007 15:54:51 +0000

@Chapter 9
Ureshii desu!
I loved this ending chapter. I literally melted during the scene on the sofa. Pi and Kame were so sweet! ♡ They are meant for each other *nods*.

Nakamaru is such a good friend and the oblivious Bakanishi is too funny. I really appreciated the your humor throughout the fic. I enjoyed myself very much reading it. Thanks a lot! *hugs*

I hope you will write more PiKame in the near future ^___^ by now ‘Otsukare sama deshita!’ *bows*