But Kame goes well with almost anybody and everybody, not just jealous dorks. :D

I’ve got to wonder though, why Kame goes so well with jealous dorks.

2) Didn’t think that people really cared about whether or not Ryo and Uchi got together. ^^;; The thing is, it’s not as if they dunno that they like each other. The problem was that if they stuck together, they would have to have a long distance relationship, which they didn’t think would be a good idea last time and so they split. But I guess they’re sorta like, together, yet not together. Does that make sense?

Anyway, thanks for writing such a long comment as always. =) Unlike me, who just spams and gives really useless feedback. ^^;; But hope that you’ll continue updating without needing any threats first. XP

Too bad u didn’t listen to me when I told u to end the fic with smut *gets whacked* But well, the prospect of those two having a bath together should be good enough to keep my H-mind satisfied for the time being. ^.~

I’m glad that this time, it was Kame who took the initiative to their talk and also their relationship.

Yamapi wanting to call Kame only to refrain from doing so eventually when he remembers, he’s supposed to be angry at the other, sooo reminds me of me, when I’m trying to be angry at you *rofl* But yeah, that was completely random *whistles*

And Pi calling himself a cow had me crack up. badly. XDD

Actually wanted to write more about chapter 14, but I’m still so thrilled about 14.5 that I need to write about that now. Cos OMG, u mentioned YANK playing tennis together!!!! *still wants to see their double-match so badly* XD Thanks sooo much for including that after all!!! ♥ ♥ ♥

Kinda feel sorry for Kusano (and everyone else who gets ‘too close’ to Kame) tho. poor fanboy *lol*
Jealous and overprotective!Pi is so much love nonetheless. :3
Did Ryo and Uchi finally get together as well? *curious* (somehow I can see Pi making sure they hook up, too. even if only to get Ryo away from Kame XDD)

Darn, can’t believe this fic is over now…. no more updates from u to look forwards to ;_; But on the other hand at least u also can’t blackmail me with them anymore either. woot! *runs*

Glad to see u’ve found the time to edit final chapter after all (even tho I’m sure it didn’t need as much editing as u said it did ^.~)
Gotta read now~
And spam u later ;p

——@altiui:
Originally, Pi wasn’t supposed to end up being that big of a character in both fics of this series, so it’s pretty amazing how he ended being the ‘star’. XD Despite how much I enjoy torturing Pi in this fic, I think he too is probably my fave character over both series. If there’s any complaints, it would be the fact that Pi seemed so random at times that there’s the risk of inconsistency in writing his personality in here. ^^;;

Anyway, glad that you like this chapter. Will try really hard to make sure the final chapter doesn’t disappoint you and all the other readers (though that seems difficult since I have a “bad at writing endings” problem).

——@Mina:
Since the original plan for the last chapter is going to be ‘discarded’, Ryo might or might not appear in the final chapter. o_O It really depends. Anyway, even if Ryo did say that the keitai strap wasn’t important, I think to Kame it is and so he wouldn’t want to take it off. He cherishes the relationships he has with other people. Or at least that’s how I see it.

And no I have no time and will not be going to find those books you recommended (partly cos the plot doesn’t interest me). Sorry.

Ok, now to the Chapter 13:
I really didn’t expect it to happen, but I actually WANT Ryo to appear soon. Like right now. *lol*
U know my reaction when u mentioned him being in final chapter, but now I seriously can’t wait for him to show up and fix what those two bakas did wrong in their relationship already *feels like whacking both Pi and Kame*
I guess Ryo just has to tell Kame, he doesn’t need the ketai strap as a symbol of their friendship, so Kame can take it off and fulfil Pi’s request. It might not be exactly what that baka Pi (whom I still love, btw *lol*) had in mind when he made that ultimatum but who cares. *cough*
Ok, and I think Kame should just tell Pi explicitly (so the baka gets it for sure ^.~) how he feels, esp about Ryo and Pi himself. then this ketai strap choice wouldn’t even be necessary anymore.

And now for the most important part:
AAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
THEY KISSED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
FINALLYYYYYYY!!!
*jumps up and down happily*
If anything I would have expected them to kiss in very last chapter, cos u always seemed so reluctant to let them kiss at all. BUT THANK GOD U GAVE THEM AT LEAST SOME RABU ACTION!!!! *sooooo relieved*
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Ack! Angst kills fangirls slowly.

I’ve enjoyed how you’ve characterized everyone so far but Yamapi is my favorite character here. I’m shocked myself that it isn’t Kame. *LOL* And it really used to be him but I really liked the way Yamapi made Kame that ultimatum and then walked away when it was not met. He’s not always going to be easy and I like that sort of complexity. Because the ultimatum shocked me and walking away simply floored me. Considering that he was doting so heavily on Kame previously…yet on the other side perhaps because his feelings are so strong that he can walk away from it. As if to say: “This is too much. I can’t handle it anymore.”

Perhaps my favorite chapter. ^_^

I can’t wait for the sequel ,please update soon !!!

(PS : Just one chapter left :( ?? )

——@niji:
Aw I’m sorry that it’s not gonna end with RyoKame. I guess in a way it seemed like it should be RyoKame? But it’s cos when the authors are both PiKame fans is kinda hard to not want to write PiKame, ne? ^^;; And yeah, JinJun action! Ok not really. But don’t you just love them when they’re arguing in Utawara? XD

——@mina:
Look at the sidebar, first section “sketch:the scribblers”, if you click on any of the PITCH / r / j links it’ll bring you back to the main blog. happy? thank sis.