DOUBLE FAULT

Chapter One

“Shouldn’t we be helping out with the preparations for the party instead of walking around shopping?”

“I’m sure they have enough people there. We’ll only make things worse.” Ryo said as he picked up a pair of keitai straps, passing one to Kame. “These are nice. Let’s get them.”

“Huh?” Kame looked at Ryo, confused. “Why do we need to get keitai straps for? And matching ones too?”

“If you don’t want it just say so.” Ryo grabbed the keitai strap back from Kame and was about to put the pair back when Kame stopped him.

“I didn’t say that I didn’t want it. I was just asking why.”

“Then you’re paying for both.”

“Nande?” Kame pouted. “Ryo-chan’s the one who wanted to buy them at first.”

“I changed my mind. You can buy it if you want. We don’t need matching keitai straps. I’ll look for another design.”

“Nande?” Kame pouted some more. “Fine, I’ll pay for both so you have no choice but to use it.”

“Why should I use it just because you said so?”

“I’m your other half. So we should have matching keitai straps right? If you don’t use it too then I won’t be your other half anymore.” Kame stuck his tongue out as he went to pay for the keitai straps.

“And to think you were the one asking me why we should have matching keitai straps.” Ryo retorted. Just then, Kame’s cellphone rang.

“Moshi moshi. Oh Yamapi?” Kame watched from the corner of his eye as Ryo walked out of the shop, appearing to look at someone across the road. “…Uh, we are at the shops near the basketball court…” Ryo had crossed the road, approaching the person sitting in the bus stop opposite. “… Yeah, I see the store you’re talking about… okay, no problem.”

As Kame closed his cellphone, he quickly turned to take a closer look at the person Ryo was talking to. Squinting his eyes, he almost fell over when he realised who it was. Worried as to what Ryo might have said to the person in question, Kame hurried across the road to stop any catastrophe from happening.

“Ryo-chan, what are you doing?”

“Oh, Kame, look who’s here.” Ryo said nonchalantly, pointing towards a very tired looking Jin.

Kame nodded politely, not knowing quite how to react. His mind was racing with all the possible insults that Ryo could have come up with. But he should have known that Ryo was unpredictable sometimes.

“I asked him to go out on a date-”

“What?!” Kame looked from Ryo to Jin and back to Ryo again. Ryo merely shrugged, while Jin appeared to not have even noticed their presence. Instead when a bus pulled into the stop, Jin just stood up without a word and got on, leaving Ryo and Kame alone.

“Why did you do that for?” Kame asked Ryo, annoyed.

“You don’t have to get all upset. It wasn’t as if that fellow was going to go out on a date with me.”

“That’s not the point. Why did you ask him out on a date for? Do you like him?”

Ryo shrugged once more. “Not really. I dunno, he’s quite cute and all, but he seems rather arrogant if you ask me. I don’t really see what it was about him that made you gush so much.”

“I don’t gush.” Kame said defensively. “And if you don’t like him why did you ask him out on date?”

“I was just making fun of you that’s all. Didn’t you do that in your very first meeting with him?” Ryo replied easily. Kame merely pouted, then stormed off in annoyance, leaving Ryo to catch up with him. “Oi, you don’t have to get so upset.”

It wasn’t as if Ryo wanted to steal Jin away from Kame. Truth was, he didn’t like Jin at all, and he didn’t ask the latter to go out on a date with him. He had actually asked Jin to go out on a date with Kame, knowing that it was what Kame wanted — even if Ryo didn’t like the idea of those two out on date — but Jin just looked at him blankly and said nothing, which pissed him off somewhat. And then Kame had joined them, but before he could even complete his sentence Kame had interrupted and he didn’t feel like explaining. Seeing Kame getting all jealous and mad at him now only made him even more reluctant to explain properly.

“Hey you two!” As they walked pass the video arcade, a voice called out to them.

“Ah, Yamapi.”

“Have you guys bought the stuff I asked you to?”

“What stuff?” Ryo asked.

“Oh I forgot.” Kame smacked himself on the forehead.

“Ah gomen, gomen! Kame’s very forgetful these days.” Ryo apologised profusely.

Yamapi sighed melodramatically. “Enjoying your date so much that you forgot?”

“What date?!” Kame exclaimed, but was immediately hushed by Yamapi.

“Shh, Nino’s in there, I don’t want him to hear you two and figure out what we’re doing.” Yamapi stage whispered. “And it would be good if you guys try to avoid walking here.”

“No problem.” Ryo said as he grabbed Kame’s hand and turned around. “Anyway, we’ll go get the stuff now and head back to Nino’s house soon. Anything else you want us to get?”

“Don’t think so. Thanks Ryo-chan ne.” Yamapi waved as he headed back into the arcade. “Ja babes!”

Kame rolled his eyes and pouted. It was amazing how Ryo could change from evil best friend to Yamapi’s willing slave in one second.

“Hey Kame, which store were we supposed to go to?” Ryo turned back to asked him, his hand still holding on to Kame’s. “And what’s with that pout on your face. Still sulking?”

“It’s the one over there.” Kame pointed at the store that Yamapi had told him. “And I’m not sulking.”

“Fine, fine, you’re just trying to look cute. Really, it’s okay. Even if you’re ugly you’ll still be my other half.”

Kame wasn’t sure whether to be touched by what Ryo said or take it as another one of Ryo’s usual insults. Although Ryo calling him ugly was becoming such a usual thing that he was hardly affected by it anymore. He was still mad at Ryo anyway. He pulled his hand away, just to show his anger, but Ryo didn’t react in any way and merely continued walking. Even after they had bought the necessary stuff and reached Nino’s house, Kame was still in a bad mood.

When the door opened, they were greeted by a face covered in white powder. Ignoring Taisuke completely, they walked passed him into the house, as Taisuke complained about how long they took.

“You guys took forever! You two should have been here an hour ago in the first place. Even if you had to buy those things on the way, you should have been here earlier!”

“Well someone here went to hit on people on the street, that’s why we were delayed.” Kame muttered.

“I told you I’m not interested in that Akanishi Jin.”

“Ryo-chan, you were hitting on Akanishi?”

“Yeah, this guy went to ask him to go out on a date.”

“Uso!” Taisuke’s eyes widened.

“I told you, I don’t like that guy!”

“Yeah right. As if!” Kame said as plopped down angrily on the sofa. “You’re always doing such things, going around hitting on people and telling them they are pretty and cute and that you want them to go out on a date with you.”

“That’s only Yamapi.”

“Well now there’s at least two. Yamapi and Jin. Who knows how many there are out there that we don’t know about.”

Taisuke scratched his head as he mentally counted. “Actually, isn’t there three?”

“See! Three! There’s one more I don’t know about!”

“Eh, Kame, I was talking about you.”

“Huh?”

“There’s Yamapi, Akanishi and you. So that makes three deshou?”

“This is a stupid conversation.” Ryo stated.

“It’s not a stupid conversation. I’m pointing out a fact.” Kame turned to Taisuke. “And he does not hit on me.”

“True.” Taisuke nodded. “He says you’re ugly.”

“Deshou! He tells me that every day. See, he’s really mean to me.”

“But I told you that I’m only mean to you because I love you.”

Taisuke’s jaw dropped, his hand flew to cover his mouth as he backed away melodramatically. “I better not get involved in this lovers’ quarrel.”

“Taisuke! Get back here! This isn’t a lovers’ quarrel.” Kame stood up and protested as Ryo ignored Taisuke and continued.

“And I told you that even if you’re ugly you’re still my other half.”

“It is a lovers’ quarrel!” Taisuke pointed at them, a horrified look on his face.

“Oi! Why are you so noisy out there?” Sho asked as he popped his head out of the kitchen.

“Sho-senpai! They are having a lovers’ quarrel!!”

At Taisuke’s exclamation, several others peeped out of the kitchen.

“Dare? Dare? Who’s having a lovers’ quarrel?”

“Oh, it’s Kame-chan and Nishikido-kun.”

“Che, I thought it was a new couple.”

“I don’t care if you’re having a lovers’ quarrel, but can you all like, time-out?” Sho asked. “We still have a bit more stuff to finish before Nino comes back.”

“Yes, it won’t be a surprise birthday party if the party’s not ready yet to surprise.” Okada stated flatly.

“You two should be separated for a while.” Tsuyoshi grabbed Kame by the collar. “You can come help me and Tsubasa finish the decorations while the rest of them get more flour on their face.”

* * * * *

Yamapi’s “Seishun Amigo” ringtone started ringing for the umpteenth time. Nino rolled his eyes as Yamapi excused himself and walked towards a corner.

“Moshi… um… ya ok… ready? … outside… 5… ja.”

“Why do you keep running off to make phonecalls today?” Nino asked as Yamapi walked back towards him. “I mean, you told me that you were bored and wanted to hang out and drag me out for almost the whole day, but yet you keep running off somewhere. Why don’t you just go out with your phone?”

“But I still like Nino best! The phone can’t compare!” Yamapi exclaimed as he tugged at Nino’s sleeve.

“And then there was that idiot guy at the arcade and he was so annoying. And he kept asking me to play with him even though I trashed him everytime! Does he think he’ll beat me? Not in a million years!”

“Hai!”

“I’m contemplating whether or not I can still go back to that arcade. What if he stalks me?”

“I will protect you!” Yamapi raised his arm as if to make a show of his muscles.

“What if he stalks you too?”

“Then Nino will protect me!”

Nino made a face. “He’ll be stalking both of us!”

“Eh, I’ll ask Ryo-chan to scare him off? Or I can ask Kame too! You should have seen his black face.”

“When? You saw Kame earlier?”

“Eh?” Yamapi realised that he had made a blunder, but quickly made up a lie to save himself as the two approached Nino’s house. “I meant the other day.”

“Anyway, I digress. My point was, if you’re going to ask me to go out with you to hang out cos you needed company, please do not abandon your ‘company’ to amuse themselves playing arcade games with strangers.” Nino said as he opened the door. “I could have spend my time with Sh-”

“SURPRISE!”

“Sho-kun!” Nino’s eyes widened when he saw Sho standing in front of him just when he was talking about spending time with the latter. Then realised that he had almost given away their relationship and quickly tried to cover up his mistake. “Minna! What are you guys doing here?”

“Throwing you a birthday party of course.” Yamapi grinned as he jumped onto Nino’s back. “Now, what were you saying about spending time with Sh-”

“My birthday isn’t until next week.” Nino said quickly, interrupting Yamapi. He shot daggers at his best friend before turning back to everyone. “You guys didn’t destroy my house did ya?”

“Wah, gaki, we came all the way here to throw you a party and you ask us if we destroyed your house.” Tsuyoshi put an arm around Nino’s neck, pretending to wrestle with his kouhai.

“Ah, joudan! Joudan! Since senpai you are all here, of course everything will be fine, ne? Just that, I saw Taisuke and his face was covered with flour and I started to get worried…”

“Oi! Nino! That’s so mean!” Taisuke complained as he wiped the flour off his face.

“Well, it’s not just you who worries me. Sho-kun too… I don’t trust him.”

“Hey I’m your senpai!” Sho pouted.

“Maa, maa, let’s go eat now while the food is hot.” Takki said, playing his usual role of fuku buchou and getting everyone to work.

“Nino, you should see the cake we baked for you!” Taisuke exclaimed as he followed Tsubasa into the kitchen to bring out the cake.

“You helped bake it?” Nino raised an eyebrow.

Taisuke stopped in his tracks and stuck his tongue out. “What? Worried that I might poison you? I’m not evil like you or Ryo-chan.”

“Well I don’t think you’ll poison Nino on purpose. But you might do so accidentally.” Ryo remarked from where he stood next to Kame, the latter looking a little too moody for a party.

Taisuke ignored Ryo and disappeared into the kitchen. The others at the party started crowding Nino once more, piling the birthday boy with presents. Yamapi moved aside to avoid the avalanche, and stood in the spot that Ryo had vacated. Kame hadn’t moved from his spot, arms still crossed over his chest, a pout evident on his face. Yamapi pinched Kame’s nose.

“I can’t breathe.” Kame’s nasal voice came out after a while.

“Oh, I thought you were a mannequin, the way you were standing so still like a statue.” Yamapi grinned as he released Kame’s nose. “Why are you so moody? Is it because I interrupted your date with Ryo-chan earlier?”

“No. And that wasn’t a date anyway.” Kame rubbed his nose. “Someone just got on my nerves that’s all.”

“That someone isn’t me right?”

“Of course not. Why would you get on my nerves? At least you don’t go around calling me ugly.”

“What did Ryo-chan do this time?”

As Kame opened his mouth to answer, they were interrupted by the rest singing ‘Happy Birthday’ to Nino. Yamapi moved to stand next to Nino as they all gathered to take pictures, leaving Kame to stand next to Ryo. As they all settled down to eat the cake, Yamapi plopped down next to Nino again, Sho on the other side of Nino, forgetting his earlier conversation with Kame until he noticed Kame sulking again.

“Kame, you want some more cake?” Ryo asked Kame, who merely ignored him once more, something he had been doing since the party began.

Yamapi quietly observed his two friends from across, a little amused, a little concerned, noting Kame’s ever present defiant pout and Ryo’s multiple attempts at getting Kame’s attention. He nudged Nino, who was seated next to him, gesturing at Kame. “That’s the black face I was talking about earlier.”

“Sou…” Nino nodded as he too watched Kame and Ryo, before blatantly asking out loud. “Kame! Why’s your face so black?”

Kame looked up, refusing to answer, which didn’t really matter since Taisuke voluntarily replied for him.

“Kame and Ryo-chan are having a lovers’ quarrel!” Taisuke announced to Yamapi and Nino, the only ones who weren’t present earlier. “Because Ryo-chan was hitting on Akanishi, so Kame was jealous. Because Kame likes Akanishi, but he’s also Ryo-chan’s other half. Also, Kame was angry with Ryo-chan for always hitting on other people. Besides hitting on Akanishi, he always hits on Yamapi. But Ryo-chan said he only hits on Yamapi and that he is not interested in Akanishi? And more importantly, Ryo-chan said he loves Kame! So, Ryo-chan likes Yamapi and Kame? And Kame likes Akanishi and Ryo-chan? Ah! It’s a love square!”

“But I like Kame too.” Yamapi stated easily.

“Yamapi, you’re making this whole thing more complicated. Don’t make the shape even weirder!”

“It’s still a square.”

“Oh yeah, you’re right.”

“Ah, I forgot that the brain of yours is a bit slow.”

“Oi!”

“I’m amazed that Taisuke managed to ramble on so much and none of us actually bothered to shut him up.” Nino retorted.

“I was answering your question!”

“I was asking Kame, not you.”

“Wah, you guys are all bullying me as usual. Sho-senpai!”

“Ah minna! Let’s play some games, shall we?” Sho said quickly, deciding that he should help Taisuke this time, not just from Nino and Yamapi’s bullying, but from incurring the wrath of Kame and Ryo if Taisuke continued his ramble about the ‘Love Square’. “Let’s pair up and play Pictionary or something.”

“Nino, I’m pairing with you!” Yamapi hugged his best friend.

“Eh, I was thinking of pairing up with Sho-kun instead.”

Yamapi pulled back and made a face like he was about to cry. “Nino doesn’t want me anymore! Waaaaaaaaaaah!”

“Urusai yo!” Nino covered his ears.

“Nino, how could you do this to me? We were childhood sweethearts and now you left me for Sho-kun! Ah, I need to find a new best friend to hug!”

“I don’t mind.” Ryo stood up, offering himself for Yamapi to glomp. Yamapi paused and considered the offer, before pushing Ryo aside and moving towards the person next to Ryo.

“Sorry Ryo-chan, but I prefer Kame.” Before Kame could react, Yamapi had already thrown himself on top of the smaller boy. “Kame-chan!”

“Oi! Oi! Stop being a leech.” Nino pulled Yamapi off Kame and dragged him into the kitchen. Everyone else watched in amusement as they heard Yamapi whining some more.

“Waaaaaah! Nino called me a leech!”

In the kitchen, Nino glared at Yamapi until he stopped whining.

“Nino, don’t stare at me like that. It’s scary.”

Nino ignored Yamapi. “What’s with that childhood sweethearts and me leaving you for Sho-kun comment?” He hissed, careful not to speak too loudly. “Do you want everybody to get suspicious? They’re not supposed to know about Sho and me.”

“Ah, they all know that you and I aren’t together. So they’ll just think I meant you found a new best friend.” Yamapi waved his hand nonchalantly. “Which, by the way, looks like is becoming the truth seeing how lately, you’ve been hanging out with him after school, more than with me.”

“We can’t do anything in school. So of course after school I’ll spend more time with him. At school we’re always together anyway.”

“Not always.”

“Hey you two.” Sho poked his head into the kitchen. “Everything alright? We’re gonna start the game soon. Though it’s only six of us since the others are playing cards.”

“I have no partner.” Yamapi glared at Sho.

Sho laughed. “Kame says he’ll partner you since he refuses to pair up with Ryo.”

“Ah! Kame-chan’s the best!”

“He only picked you as second choice. On any other day he’ll pick Ryo.”

“Ignoring!” Yamapi stuck his tongue out at Nino before skipping out of the kitchen to join the rest.

“Is Yamapi upset?” Sho turned to Nino.

“Yah, he thinks I’ve ignored him a lot recently.” Nino sighed as the two walked out of the kitchen. “I sorta know how he feels. After all, I’m usually the one who gets abandoned by him.”

“Can you two hurry? We wanna start the game now.” Yamapi called out to Nino and Sho.

Only six of them were playing — Nino and Sho in one team, Yamapi and Kame in another, and Ryo with Taisuke making the third team. The rest of the party were off playing their own card games or just sitting there reading magazines and watching tv. About an hour passed before there was finally a winner, Taisuke jumping about in excitement while Ryo merely sat there with a smirk on his face.

“I can’t believe that anyone who paired with Taisuke could win.” Nino stated bitterly. Sho sat there with a look of disappointment, while Yamapi and Kame had evident pouts on their faces. All four hated to lose. “Come to think of it, what is Ryo-chan doing here anyway?”

“What do you mean?” Ryo raised an eyebrow at Nino.

“Well, everyone here is from the basketball team except for you. So why are you here?”

“Wow I came all the way here to celebrate Nino’s birthday and I get questioned about my presence. Hey, if it wasn’t for my other half, I might not have bothered to come.”

“Nobody forced you to come.” Kame retorted.

“I didn’t say you forced me. I just said that I’m here only because of you.”

“And once again I still don’t get it, why you’re here.” Nino eyed Ryo. “So what if Kame is here? Doesn’t mean that you have to follow him here. Pfft.”

“You’re just angry cos you lost na? But I thought it was best that I played properly and showed you respect, instead of letting you win just because you’re the birthday boy.”

Nino glared at Ryo, who returned the stare. Sho looked back and forth between Nino and Ryo worriedly. Taisuke stopped bouncing with joy, while Kame and Yamapi stopped sulking to watch the ‘drama’ unfold.

“Wanna challenge at computer games?” Nino asked suddenly.

“You wanna lose again?”

“I never lose.”

“Neither do I.”

“We’ll see about that.”

“Game on.”

As the two moved off to start their match-up, everyone else — even the senpais who paused midway in their card game — turned their attention to the two, watching in amusement.

“Who do you think will win?” Yamapi turned to Kame, who was still seated beside him.

“Ryo-chan hates to lose. And he never loses. Rarely anyway.”

“Sounds exactly like Nino.”

“You think they’re related in any way?”

“Separated at birth? One sent to Osaka? They are both kinda short…”

“And sharp-tongued too.”

“Hm, the similarities are a bit scary.”

“Similarities between who and who?” Taisuke asked, suddenly popping up in front of them.

“No one’s talking to you.”

“Yeah. It’s not nice to eavesdrop on other people’s conversation.”

“You guys are being mean to me again.” Taisuke stuck his tongue out. “Fine, ignore me.”

After several rounds, Nino and Ryo stopped playing. They were tied, and both decided to come to an agreement. They were both champions. Everyone else were losers. Most of the senpais had left by then. Taisuke had to get back early as well, so only Nino, Yamapi, Kame, Ryo and Sho were left in the house.

“It’s getting late. Why don’t you two get back first?” Sho turned to Kame and Ryo. “Yamapi and I will help out Nino with cleaning the mess.”

“You sure you don’t need our help?” Kame asked.

“Nah, it’s okay. Yamapi’s staying over I think. And I’m a nice senpai so I won’t bully you guys into doing the dirty work. Haha.” Sho laughed.

Kame chuckled. “Okie, see you guys another time then. Bye!”

Kame and Ryo walked back in silence. On the bus back, they sat next to each other, Ryo trying to make small talk but Kame continuing to ignore him. Finally, after they got off the bus, Ryo snapped.

“Oi!”

“…”

“Are you dumb? Can’t even open your mouth to answer me?” Ryo remarked, and almost regretted saying it. Almost.

“No. I just don’t like talking to you.”

“Well you’re talking to me now.”

“…”

Ryo sighed melodramatically. He stared at Kame for a few seconds, before speaking again. “Where’s my keitai strap?”

“Huh?”

“You bought the matching keitai straps, didn’t you? If you’re not gonna give one to me, then what are you going to do? Keep both to yourself?” Ryo rolled his eyes. “And didn’t you say that if I didn’t use it, you won’t be my other half anymore? I can’t let that happen.”

Kame eyed Ryo. “What do you mean you can’t let that happen?”

“Well if you won’t be my other half anymore, then I’ll be one-half without my other half and that makes me incomplete…” Ryo stopped, realising how awfully cheesy he was sounding. “Point is, we’re each other’s ‘other half’ so we need each other. It’s a matter of life and death. Now hand it over.” Ryo stuck his hand out.

Kame stared at Ryo’s hand for a few moments, before finally taking out one keitai strap and placing it in the latter’s hand. “Don’t think that I’ve forgiven you or something.”

“Forgive me for what? What did I do wrong?”

“…”

Ryo grinned. “Oyasumi.” He turned to head towards the other direction, leaving Kame there, pouting.

Ryo-chan daikirai!

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57 Comments to DOUBLE FAULT

  1. Touichi says:

    @Chapter 1
    OMG, can’t believe u really listened to me for once and posted it up today Oo
    *jumps around*
    I’d shower u with love now, if this wouldn’t make u wanna throw up or something *rofl* XD
    *glomps u instead then* ;p
    *runs*

  2. vivian says:

    @Chapter 1
    awwww how sweeett hahaha i didn’t go on a-baka to read this..actually im not even sure if u posted it on a-baka..but AWWWW kame and ryo!!! hhehehe well if part 2 is gonna be up by kame’s birthday..thats only 3 more days! ganbatte!! im looking forward to it~~ what happens with akanishi?? =]] and why dont sho and nino tell the others..? i was waiting so long for the 2nd part hahaah i read double quite a while ago =DD heheh thx for writing!!

  3. Touichi says:

    @Chapter 1
    *is still jumping around*
    Aw~ I’m so happy u finally posted it up! *hearts*
    And I’m also happy that Jin didn’t get to appear more than for this one scene *gets killed by Akame-fans* XD Haha, no seriously, he’d just make things even more complicated right now, while Kame and Ryo needed to figure their issues out first ^.~
    Kame constantly sulking just makes me wanna pat him all the time – So cute *laughs* It’s a pity Yamapi never got to stay close to him for long, but well, shouldn’t have Ryo get jealous, too, right now, ne? *pats Ryo as well for having to bear with a jealous!Kame* *rofl*
    Speaking of Ryo, for some reason the ‘Yamapi’s willing slave’ term had me crack up so badly. Wonder if he’d really go as far as become a willing slave for Pi like Kame suspects XD
    And I loved this part:
    “But I like Kame too.” Yamapi stated easily.

    “Yamapi, you’re making this whole thing more complicated. Don’t make the shape even weirder!”

    “It’s still a square.”

    “Oh yeah, you’re right.”
    ————————————–
    Yay for Taisuke’s logic! XDDD
    But to keep it a square I’m sure Jin will have to show up again soon. Really curious how this next encounter is going to be~
    So, don’t forget (haha, as if my constant bugging would let u forget about it XD) to post the next chapter up on Kame’s bday, ne? ^_______________________^

  4. SumeragiAeka says:

    @Chapter 1
    See! It’s posted! It’s posted even if Idol-chan said it wasn’t going to be~! x3 And it’s 6 pages of a lovely, printed ficcy~ It’s even more lovely than the…oh my, I forgot mom bought be doughnuts! *looks at the clock* It’s past 11 pm ;___;~ Too late for sweets…

    I absolutely loved the “keitai strap” quarrel~ I’m obessed with matching straps and it was so cute~ Ryo-chan is really mean to Kame sometimes ^_^; Such a baka. But on the other hand it was incredibly sweet how when he asked Jin to go on a date with Kame, but lied to Kame later~ *glomps both of them* Just why was Jin simply sitting there and not even noticing them? Should I feel sorry for him, because he was tired or scold him for ignoring others? *blinks*

    I laughed at Pi’s conspiracy… So childish. So was the conversation with Taisuke…. How come you guys make them so…how to put it not to offend the boys… well… stupid? XD

    “See! Three! There’s one more I don’t know about!”
    “Eh, Kame, I was talking about you.” – my favorite part xD So clueless it hurts~!

    Sho-kun’s “time-out” also fitted there perfectly. Is his mind ever off the court? Of course, if Nino isn’t around?

    Eh, Nino was lucky to get that surprise bday party. It had to be a surprise if it was a week earlier, nee. Such a pity it usually happenes in fanfiction and movies only. I’d like one, too. But before I started complaining at my friends not being creative enough, I dropped my jaw at Taisuke’s announcement. That boy is scary ^_^; *glomps Taisuke* Or maybe Yamapi the Drama Queen is the scary one..?

    “childhood sweethearts” = OMG XDDD I envy Sho for not being jealous and killing Pi XD He’s so calm *admires Sho*

    Ryo-chan’s talk at the end…SWEET ;___;

    So. Do I really have to say it was – - – perfect? *fangirls* It’s good to know that I don’t =^____^=

    Oh, but the way, I’ll just use the opportunity and compliment the new layout! ^_^ It’s extremely loveable. It’s just a pity that it’s black… Black is no good, too dark for me… But it’s cute anyway **^__^** Yay~! *glomps the layout*

    Just stab be for being so irrationally cheerful today *hides*

    *glomps the authors*

  5. fffly says:

    @Chapter 1
    yay! I really liked this. and yup, it was really sweet of Ryo to ask Jin out for Kame even though he likes him. poor Ryo, and I loved sulking and jealous Kame! ^_^ I also agree with SumeragiAeka about the layout. Love the pictures used, and looking forward to reading the next chapter!

  6. nach says:

    @Chapter 1
    ohhhhhhh…. this is great! i read “double” not too long ago and really enjoyed it. i’m so glad you’re now writing (another, lol) fic with a prominent kame… and potentionally one of my favorite pairings, too.


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